Tried another edit on this picture of Andrew.
Here's the image straight out of the camera (except for the crop, I couldn't figure out how to revert back to the non-cropped version).
Edit 1 - lightened him up, but thought he still looked a little cool.
Edit 2 - Cropped him quite a bit, still trying to use the rule of thirds for his eye placement. I warmed him up, but maybe too much.
I like the last one best. I'm still learning when to stop or keep going with editing. Usually I make such a big improvement with just a few clicks in Lightroom that I think I'm done. But I'm starting to see when I need to keep going.
Updated without chopping off his head! Thanks Rachel!!